Claude's Lines

Claude were you tired that night
Of the slashes from life you’d born
Or the effort it took
And the ruts you’d worn

Did you sigh and quietly go away
Or groan and curse and fight to stay

It doesn’t matter I guess
Smooth or rough, night or noon
It’s all  to us one thing
Too soon, too soon

You lived your life full and bold
What a life, what a trip, what a soul

Memories like the notes of a wind chime
We’d struggle and laugh, call each other “pard”
Life around you my friend
Was somehow less hard

What passion you had
And infectious joy

Full tilt, wide open, and crank it up
You gave your friends such love and trust
You gave so much and gave so well
That part of you became part of us

So we will live this day in your name
Sad, oh sad that you left, but blest that you came

Warrior, artist, son, brother, husband, father and friend
Claude, so well mixed were thee
That in all who loved you when we heard you were gone
Not an eye, not a tear did not shed

Including me,



Including me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/6/2011 7:49:00 PM
Claude sounds like an amazing person. Allow him to forever live in your memories. You truly captured your love and appreciation for him in this, very well said.   -KMD
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