Claudelle

Claudelle, we must go away and start a new life. This fruitless sharecropping has just cost me my wife. Believe me, in every way, I loved your mother. Frustrated and annoyed, she left me for another. I know you were heartbroken about what happened to Linn. You will love someone else after we begin again. A bunch of other men want to hold you in their arms. They fall peril to all of your feminine charms. Your mother wanted you to marry a man fat and old. To her, he seemed to be worth his weight in gold. You knew deep inside he was not right for you. Never did you have feelings for him that were true. What sadness and grief love sometimes brings. Your flirting and coquetry have made a mess of things. Too many men are now competing for you. We will leave these surroundings and start anew. Based on the novel "Claudelle Inglish" by the late Erskine Caldwell and the 1961 film with the same title.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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O'Leary Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 8:44 AM
Good poem in every respect - rhyme, rhythm, feeling! Terry
Ball Avatar
June 9, 2016 at 1:07 PM
Well Done my friend with great description and imagery. Really good rhythm and rhyme. Nice job.God Bless and a seven from me. JB
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June 5, 2016 at 10:26 PM
Wow! I am just enchanted by this well crafted poem ! Sorry that I couldn't visit you all these days as i was a bit occupied with things around but I am happy to read your poems ...I must say, you have a love for poetry ~ Cheers ~ Red A7 from me ..
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 7:15 AM
Hi Robert i have been browsing the soup and came across you, glad you are still writing and love this one xx
Vaso Avatar
May 29, 2016 at 5:28 PM
This poem does this sad tragedy of a story justice! well done!
Heemstra Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 5:56 PM
Great writing!
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May 24, 2016 at 2:25 PM
Full of true feeling
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