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Clatter In Tree Tops

Such a clatter in the tree tops above, what a fuss you're making on this most cloudy spring day. As cool breezes gently blows through your feathers, watching you as you fly away; wondering was it worth it all, just enjoy this beautiful day as I'm doing. Written 6-1-11

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Judy Ball

Date: 7/3/2011 11:03:00 AM

Hmmmmm Could be they was-a fightin' over some female. Birds claim territory as do most wild things. That way they don't worry about their nest. Many species allow only their kind in an area but don't want some other male encroaching on their "woman". Great job here. God Bless, JB

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/7/2011 9:46:00 AM

:) I guess we are like these birds sometimes, making much ado about nothing, James. Especially loved the line about the feathers watching as they flew away! Great work. Love, Carolyn