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Classical Music

Softly the notes of a piano begin to play as evening dusk falls gently like a quiet bird in the night sky Mutant suns of long ago still haunting the heavens with its anemic haunting light; Dark waters, a whisper away from life gently gliding into the canal The piano turns to black and white in my mind, Mozart dreams Beethoven sighs Chopin angels Vivaldi cries as the evening dances away, I see a frozen tree in the middle of an empty stage: His hair is wild, his brow is furrowed deep thought, ... he is about to glide into another nocturnal sonata and so am I...

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Date: 3/23/2024 8:40:00 AM
Your poem creates a captivating sensory experience, drawing on the power of music and nature to evoke emotions of reflection, wonder, and anticipation. Through its rich imagery and lyrical language, it transports the reader to a realm where time seems suspended, and the boundaries between reality and imagination blur in the enchanting embrace of evening.
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Date: 3/22/2024 4:33:00 PM
so beautiful and briliiant poem, piano is my favorite intrument, specially Debussy and Bach, thanks Rose, for sharing a moment of grace and serenity have a nice week end
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Date: 3/22/2024 6:11:00 PM
I love the piano too and soft instrumental music, especially the classical type, thanks for reading Yann :)
Date: 3/22/2024 4:21:00 PM
absolutely a brilliant and creative write, dear Rose!! I liked the unique physical structure of your poem--reminded me of the keys on a piano. This poem was softly surreal and a compelling read. I especially liked the last four lines...they left me breathless. Have a blessed evening, hugs, Sara
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Date: 3/22/2024 6:11:00 PM
I love classical music it always take me away to another place glad you enjoyed it Sara, have a peaceful good night :)

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