Classical Elements - 5 - Metal

rough metal ore 

a sword traded for a pen 

wise decision 


a poet to find 

autumn night , losing his leafs 

warrior within
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Knop Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 3:18 AM
"A sword traded for a pen"! Wish more would do that, Marco! Very well done choka. Thank you for your comments. Gert
Guzzi Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 4:51 PM
excellent imagery! Light & Love
Delacroix Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 9:54 AM
Very nice choka. Loved the choice of words and the imagery they evoke. Loved the correlation with poetry. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
Moreno Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 9:40 AM
Nice choka Marco, I enjoyed your element series...Raul
Shahwan Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 6:33 AM
Pretty good poem. Pls re-entry: leaves. This is a brilliant choka, penned description. All the best.
Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 3:47 AM
Love this one. Keep writing. Sara
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