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Classic Doll

the classic doll in woolen overcoat her kitten heels skipping along waxed floor her baby bobbing along in her little fist glassy eyed and painted smile of happiness 12/8/2018

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Date: 12/11/2018 1:16:00 PM
Great line 'painted smile of happiness' - ambiguous meaning there - but adore her little dolly!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/11/2018 1:36:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle! :)
Date: 12/8/2018 7:36:00 PM
Delightful, sweet and imagery that make! the reader see!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/8/2018 7:48:00 PM
Thank you, sweet Sherry! A cute little girl I saw today was my inspiration :)

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