Classic Doll

the classic doll in woolen overcoat
her kitten heels skipping along waxed floor
her baby bobbing along in her little fist
glassy eyed and painted smile of happiness

12/8/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Faulkner Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 1:16 PM
Great line 'painted smile of happiness' - ambiguous meaning there - but adore her little dolly!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 1:36 PM
Thank you, Michelle! :)
Asbury Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 7:36 PM
Delightful, sweet and imagery that make! the reader see!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 7:48 PM
Thank you, sweet Sherry! A cute little girl I saw today was my inspiration :)
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