Clashing Symbols

With
caress
and cuddles-
the drama of
love
in glided
mosaic
of silver and
gold

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Kiss_(Klimt_painting)
NOTE
I thought this might be an appropriate sequel to my poem and Christie's original inspiration.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/14/2009 6:52:00 PM
A very symbolic ( I know that was a pun-:>)sorry) and tasteful tribute. Thank you for your honorable mention, You inspire and challenge me, I grace my feminine chapeau to dust the floor of the gifted pen-master!
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Date: 4/14/2009 1:02:00 PM
Well done. I regret that when I entered your contest that I couldn't find the word vignette to use among the terminology. So, i was forced to improvise. Sorry. Gerard.
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Date: 4/14/2009 7:43:00 AM
Excellent flow of "contradiction" , in title and clever presentation , as ever , Sir Brian ...
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Date: 4/14/2009 7:24:00 AM
I love the imagery and rhythm of it ... respell glided ... gilded ... prosperity and peace
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Date: 4/14/2009 7:03:00 AM
What great subject matter to continue with. Dramatic and beautiful the painting and the poem are delicately intense. Extremely appropriate, I would love another one yet. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/14/2009 5:45:00 AM
Love the color, the excitement and feeling of love's splendor in this painting! Thanks for inspiring me to take a look! ~ Best Wishes, Carrie
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Date: 4/14/2009 4:13:00 AM
I love the title of clashing symbols and then in the piece the drama unfolding...good write.
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