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Clash of civilization

NO More day NO More night Rainy sun and blue moon in the half-light of day Dancing with green silence NO more music caught red-handed by the simultaneous clash of lives in the middle of the orange street ablaze by the simultaneous shock of lives exploded in he middle of the yellow glowing night by the glare of a dark haystack Aby M., Paris, 28/01/2024

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Beata Agustin

Date: 6/30/2024 11:45:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 1/27/2024 7:26:00 PM

Dear Abby, I really like how your poem, mesmerizes with its clear imagery and rhythmic flow. "NO More day NO More night," sets the tone for a world in flux, where contrasts collide in a world of chaos. The juxtaposition of elements like "Rainy sun and blue moon" evokes a surreal atmosphere, while the imagery of lives clashing. Wonderful written! - Blessings, Daniel