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Clash of civilization

NO More day NO More night Rainy sun and blue moon in the half-light of day Dancing with green silence NO more music caught red-handed by the simultaneous clash of lives in the middle of the orange street ablaze by the simultaneous shock of lives exploded in he middle of the yellow glowing night by the glare of a dark haystack Aby M., Paris, 28/01/2024

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 1/27/2024 7:26:00 PM

Dear Abby, I really like how your poem, mesmerizes with its clear imagery and rhythmic flow. "NO More day NO More night," sets the tone for a world in flux, where contrasts collide in a world of chaos. The juxtaposition of elements like "Rainy sun and blue moon" evokes a surreal atmosphere, while the imagery of lives clashing. Wonderful written! - Blessings, Daniel