David Lindsay Poet Verse

Clarity In a Treasure Box - Poetry Contest

FUN

time-out

vacation



zeals of zebras bound

kenyan dust sweeps and swirls

stripes blaze with great adventure



"african treasure, dream fulfilled"




Written 29/6/16 for CLARITY IN A TREASURE BOX - Poetry Contest

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Andrea Dietrich July 6, 2016 at 6:17 PM I guess that safari did not fit in the treasure box, but it was a very fun entry. Loved the read. Congrats, David

Nette Onclaud July 2, 2016 at 1:48 PM david, i have never given an HM in any of my challenges but the whole piece, except the first line, was exciting, well-worded... fine congrats on your win and thanks for joining my contest.. huggs David Lindsay July 4, 2016 at 9:32 AM Thanks very much for the encouragement. Interesting format to try to write to :)

Franco Gonza June 29, 2016 at 1:35 PM A thrill of an adventure well done! I hope to visit Africa someday! Soup mail!