Clarity In a Treasure Box

TRUTH d i v i n e h o l o g r a m matter and ether’s sacred interweaving from atoms to galaxies “See a world in a grain of sand” —William Blake For contest: Clarity in a Treasure Box Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
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Quigley Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 11:57 AM
Good luck
Dutta Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 7:31 PM
Beautifully composed Tom. Wish you best for contest
Quigley Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 11:14 PM
Thank you, Anisha!
Bateman Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 4:39 PM
Tom, Very well-done here for sure. Best of Luck in the contest!! "Truth" is a constant for sure in our ever-evolving universe. Cheers and Best, Gary
Quigley Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 11:14 PM
Thank you, Gary!
Dietrich Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 11:12 PM
wow, this is one of the VERY best I've seen, tom. I will be very surprised if I do not see this one on the winner list!
Quigley Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 7:31 AM
Thanks, Andrea!
Ashe Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 8:54 PM
The very first word in the very first line is what this is....TRUTH!
Quigley Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 7:34 AM
Thank you, Walter!
Trifiatis Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 1:52 PM
Brilliant! A seven dear, Tom!
Quigley Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 7:35 AM
Thank you, Demetrios!
Turner Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 9:19 AM
Very deep and intellectual. I like it. If I were to guess, I'd bet your IQ is around 160? You are obviously extremely smart.
Turner Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 5:43 PM
I am a shade under but I accept my shortcomings! lol
Quigley Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 9:45 AM
IIRC from your bio, you're similarly afflicted, no?
Quigley Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 9:44 AM
Thanks, Daniel. What's in a number? "Every excess causes a defect; every defect an excess. Every sweet hath its sour; every evil its good. Every faculty which is a receiver of pleasure has an equal penalty put on its abuse. It is to answer for its moderation with its life. For every grain of wit there is a grain of folly."--Ralph Waldo Emerson.
Hoffman Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 9:16 AM
Nice poem about creationism Tom! Good luck int the contest!:)
Quigley Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 9:41 AM
Thank you, Cheryl. Creationism with a small "c," as a matter of intent. I don't purport to know how it all came about, but I believe the universe has intelligence behind it.
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