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Clarity In a Treasure Box

CURLS hair cut big boy now tied up with ribbon locked in box of treasures with my sentimental tears "another childhood memento" 6/28/16 Clarity in a treasure box

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2016 6:08:00 PM

Hey, big congrats. you DONE GOOD (hahaha).

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/5/2016 11:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful first place win Marti. Excellent and moving! Very well deserved. 7 ; )

John Hamilton

Date: 7/4/2016 10:17:00 AM

Congrats on your well deserved win! So much said in so few words! You're on a winning roll!

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/3/2016 7:37:00 PM

Congratulations Marti, a most deserving win...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/2/2016 1:06:00 PM

so original that i felt i was part of this moment... this ruled!... big cheers for your topnotch award with thanks for being part of my contest.. huggs

Caycay Jennings

Date: 7/2/2016 9:17:00 AM

I have my own boy-baby curl saved in my son's baby book. This short ditty is powerfully emotional, you packed each line well. Simply lovely and touching ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/29/2016 11:18:00 PM

Oh yes, I saw this cute one already. Well, wanted to tell you I won't be around after thursday in case you don't hear from me in next several days . It's 13 hours traveling to Oregon coast. Wish us luck!! will be nice to see my son's family

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2016 8:27:00 PM

oh, I had considered this topic as well. Good one. VERY good one. and time to fave you , Marti, my new fave poet.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/28/2016 10:13:00 AM

oh Marti this is so wonderful it brought a lump to my throat - I remember this with my son's first hair cut:-) hugs jan xx