Clarity

Clear as fine crystal
Her water rushing downstream
by tall evergreens
feeding a garden
of rugged and smooth surfaces
in colorful shades.
Abundant with life
Her breath in all forms and shapes
Her nature, dancing praise.

Clear as azure skies
His light streaming down so bright
Never ending fire.
Even when gray clouds
Obstruct the view, storming loud
The sun never stops.
When through breaks His rays 
The splendor of Her presence
Takes His breath away.

By CarolineCécile
Copyright © 06.08.10
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 4:01 PM
Very expressive and descriptive write that you have penned in this one..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Byrne Avatar
June 10, 2010 at 6:54 PM
good job Caroline.it works!
Dietrich Avatar
June 9, 2010 at 11:18 PM
great imagery here. I really like it! LUv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
June 9, 2010 at 9:41 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Caroline. Wishing you the best always in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 7:26 PM
A wonderful write with apt images. I enjoyed it
Neels Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 7:10 PM
Stunning images you've created with your words ~ love WN
A   Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 6:19 PM
beautifully breathtaking write,,, it sounds soothing the way you wrote it, enjoyed...p.d.
Devonshire Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 6:10 PM
Beautiful imagery, Caroline, and a fine testament to your strong faith. You always provide such an uplifting perspective in your poetry. I love it! Carolyn
Richards Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 5:21 PM
This is beautiful and breath-taking!! Lovely poem, Caroline! (and I've also been meaning to say...you have the most beautiful name! :) !!!
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