Clairvoyant Unveiled

i see dead people 
             but they can never see me 

              ~ i see through her too




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any form any theme Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand  10th place


Senryu Humorous, Satirical or Dark	
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin 3rd place
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Logan Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 3:28 AM
I missed this one, but now that I've read it, I'll have to give it some thought. It won a placement, so that's worth something.
Logan Avatar
February 5, 2021 at 4:10 AM
There are most definitely poltergeists, trolls, and strange entities stirring the soup. I'm afraid some have fallen in to stay, despite the fact that they add no flavor. Some even try to sour it, but then some kind poet comes along and throws in a spoon full of sugar, and all is well again. Yes, you're at #2. I just looked.
Kavanagh  Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 4:08 AM
Yeah this one is very mysterious Jenna, I’m not kidding, it’s showing that it is number 2 on best new poems, just checked it, but a few other times I’ve checked it, has totally disappeared completely off the list, I wonder is the clairvoyant telling me something, if you get a chance could you look it up, we might have a poltergeist in the soup, cheers David
Costales Avatar
January 31, 2021 at 10:52 AM
I can never write this form of poetry, short but deep. I tend to be verbose. You’ve done it so cleverly, and yet the thought behind it is like a power punch. Congrats for the win
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 31, 2021 at 11:13 AM
Thank you so much for looking in Josefina, I do like to hit hard and fast where appropriate, but also enjoy the verbose, cheers David
Krutsinger Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 5:08 AM
Your cleverness parades out of this poem wearing a coal-miner's lit hat!
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 8:52 AM
Yes I seen the light, was very well received, on the soup, but got a 10th place in one of, the daily contests, someone doesn’t like the type of light I shine, cheers David
Flaherty Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 9:36 AM
As transparent As school toilet tracing paper Booo
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 10:01 AM
Nothing see through about the fortunes they make no pun intended Cheers
Koplin Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 5:24 AM
Congratulations on your win, David!
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 5:43 AM
Thanks Mark I’m delighted with the placement, cheers David
Andresen Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 3:12 AM
...Theresa Caputo ... - Congratulations on your win, David :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 4:23 AM
Ha ha yes indeed, Anne-Lise, made a fortune from it, cheers David
Gauthier Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 6:54 PM
Good one, David ~
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 8:01 PM
Thanks Line, appreciate you looking in, cheers David
Sambourne Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 5:29 PM
Terrific subject that beams with humor. A fine, clever senryu once again. Best wishes, Brian
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 8:05 PM
Thanks Brian, delighted to have received a placement, was definitely a tough contest, standard was pretty high, cheers David
Allison Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 3:22 PM
ha ha ha love it there are a lot of charlatans out there:-( hugs jan xx
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 8:10 PM
Especially at the mystic game, Jan, they can see you coming a mile off, no magic powers needed, cheers David
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 1:19 PM
good one, David. Congrats. I would like to believe there are actually a few of them out there in the world who are true ones
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 1:41 PM
I understand Andrea, but sometimes their reputation proceeds them, also heartbroken people desperate to connect with lost loved ones will grasp at anything, for comfort, and who can blame them, cheers David
Kitchin Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 12:31 PM
David, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative poem!
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 12:34 PM
Thank you Tania, absolutely delighted to make the cut, cheers David
Michael Avatar
January 12, 2021 at 10:43 AM
Nice one...
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 12, 2021 at 11:37 AM
Cheers Arturo thanks for looking in
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 12, 2021 at 9:50 AM
Oh I love it!!! Winner for me! xomo
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 12, 2021 at 9:59 AM
Thanks super Mo, the clairvoyant told me that too, Lol cheers David
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