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Clairvoyant Unveiled

i see dead people 
             but they can never see me 

              ~ i see through her too




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Jenna Logan

Date: 2/4/2021 3:28:00 AM

I missed this one, but now that I've read it, I'll have to give it some thought. It won a placement, so that's worth something.

Jenna Logan
Date: 2/5/2021 4:10:00 AM

There are most definitely poltergeists, trolls, and strange entities stirring the soup. I'm afraid some have fallen in to stay, despite the fact that they add no flavor. Some even try to sour it, but then some kind poet comes along and throws in a spoon full of sugar, and all is well again. Yes, you're at #2. I just looked.

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/4/2021 4:08:00 AM

Yeah this one is very mysterious Jenna, I’m not kidding, it’s showing that it is number 2 on best new poems, just checked it, but a few other times I’ve checked it, has totally disappeared completely off the list, I wonder is the clairvoyant telling me something, if you get a chance could you look it up, we might have a poltergeist in the soup, cheers David

Josefina Costales

Date: 1/31/2021 10:52:00 AM

I can never write this form of poetry, short but deep. I tend to be verbose. You’ve done it so cleverly, and yet the thought behind it is like a power punch. Congrats for the win

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/31/2021 11:13:00 AM

Thank you so much for looking in Josefina, I do like to hit hard and fast where appropriate, but also enjoy the verbose, cheers David

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/20/2021 5:08:00 AM

Your cleverness parades out of this poem wearing a coal-miner's lit hat!

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/20/2021 8:52:00 AM

Yes I seen the light, was very well received, on the soup, but got a 10th place in one of, the daily contests, someone doesn’t like the type of light I shine, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 1/17/2021 9:36:00 AM

As transparent As school toilet tracing paper Booo

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/17/2021 10:01:00 AM

Nothing see through about the fortunes they make no pun intended Cheers

Mark Koplin

Date: 1/15/2021 5:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, David!

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/15/2021 5:43:00 AM

Thanks Mark I’m delighted with the placement, cheers David

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/15/2021 3:12:00 AM

...Theresa Caputo ... - Congratulations on your win, David :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/15/2021 4:23:00 AM

Ha ha yes indeed, Anne-Lise, made a fortune from it, cheers David

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/14/2021 6:54:00 PM

Good one, David ~

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/14/2021 8:01:00 PM

Thanks Line, appreciate you looking in, cheers David

Brian Sambourne

Date: 1/14/2021 5:29:00 PM

Terrific subject that beams with humor. A fine, clever senryu once again. Best wishes, Brian

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/14/2021 8:05:00 PM

Thanks Brian, delighted to have received a placement, was definitely a tough contest, standard was pretty high, cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 1/14/2021 3:22:00 PM

ha ha ha love it there are a lot of charlatans out there:-( hugs jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/14/2021 8:10:00 PM

Especially at the mystic game, Jan, they can see you coming a mile off, no magic powers needed, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2021 1:19:00 PM

good one, David. Congrats. I would like to believe there are actually a few of them out there in the world who are true ones

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/14/2021 1:41:00 PM

I understand Andrea, but sometimes their reputation proceeds them, also heartbroken people desperate to connect with lost loved ones will grasp at anything, for comfort, and who can blame them, cheers David