Claimed

Death, Called to me… before Life, …Ever had a chance And.. …Left its mark on me. Claiming my soul as its own Snuffing that glorious spark That never grew. Leaving nothing left For this world But a hollow vessel That this world Has filled with sorrow.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/8/2015 3:37:00 PM

AMANDA, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 2/8/2015 2:59:00 PM

Amanda, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/3/2015 4:08:00 AM

- I want to welcome you to P- Soup, Amanda - The friendly words that written today can bear fruit tomorrow - Looking forward to read more poems from you in the future :) - // Anne-Lise :)