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Civil Twilight

although weightless beyond skyline’s phases visibly mirroring iridescent dew-- there is something soft about the blue-yellow of twilight, like a meditation of fragile chorale from swallows wafting along thin outlines, minutes between dusk and sunrise… low fire. warm joy. cozy beds. and so, as moonglow wanes vanishes bequeathing its crown to early dawn , we nourish the pulp of eve's honey that twirls on a filmy carousel of regret or perhaps, answered promises., for when eve’s dreams are gone, undone we reach them within twilight’s embrace. Dated 3/03/2018 For Pick a Title--Free Verse of Edward Ibeh
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Ibeh Avatar
March 9, 2019 at 7:30 PM
Thanks for taking part in my contest, Nette!:-) Such a wonderful poem! Congratulations on your win!
Cornish Avatar
March 8, 2019 at 9:40 AM
Few have the smooth pen that evokes thoughts yet to be, like you.
Michael Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 4:51 AM
It's a longing poem...peaceful state of mind...like the vibes ...
Krutsinger Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 4:42 AM
Imagery unparalleled, my friend. "bequeathing its crown to early dawn , we nourish the pulp of eve's honey " Sweet!
Sharp Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 10:33 PM
Poetic as ever, Nette, your words are always masterfully crafted.
Kiser Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 6:58 PM
Oh this is a "fav", Nette; it's so soothing and tranquil; I may re-read before going to bed. Just lovely.
Pandit Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 2:59 PM
Splendid imagery..you captured the hues of the photo in your excellent poem.
Lawless Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 1:50 PM
some very interesting metaphoric imagery in this one Nette...beautifully done
Cunningham Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 12:14 PM
Beautiful verse Nette, it is an enchanting time of day before nightfall. Tom.
Andresen Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 11:23 AM
- Not only the color is soft .... this poem has a special softness of beautiful words, Nette - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 10:31 AM
Absolutely beautifully written Nette! :)
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