Civil Discourse

Let us deport-- with skill--
Let us discourse--with care--
Powder exists in Charcoal--
Before it exists in Fire.        
                                   ~ Emily Dickinson

Good words anoint, ill words kill 
                                   ~ Florio


It's said that sticks and stones break bones
   but words can serve as weapons too,
so wield with caution what you write
   let civil discourse have its due. 

A finely crafted turn of phrase
   will prove more winsome than a harsh
phillipic or a raging rant
   that drags one's soul down like a marsh. 

Are not our writings most effective 
  when our readers wish to read
our inner thoughts, instead of feeling 
  whipped by some ill-tempered screed? 

When I hear thunder's crash, I flee 
   from lightning's sharp, injurious ray -
I hear your thunder, not your words
   As though you speak a mile away.

I'm not promoting caged emotions;
   ire and outrage have their place,
but when the missile shrieks, there's few
   still left the message to embrace.

Written 21 Dec 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Maverick Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 4:37 PM
Good empathy John well worth putting Down for us to read, great stuff to motivate To get others thinking freely )
Watt Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 9:22 PM
Thank you for the visit and encouraging comment, Joe. I encourage free thinking, as well as thoughtful, tactful, and considerate dialog.
Spilchuk Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 9:39 AM
Truthful expression using poetics to voice poetic opinion with imagery. Nicely done. I agree with Andrea' comments. Also, I find that people who use or dwell on swearing and vulgar slang when writing poetry lack depth and imagination.
Watt Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 9:23 PM
Fully agree, Dennis. Thank you for coming by and leaving your thoughtful comment.
Dietrich Avatar
December 29, 2021 at 1:13 PM
Here is one I somehow missed. I think righteous anger has its place in poetry and writing. Just not aiming one's anger at individuals, for example, people we know in our community or using a ranting style that goes way overboard. You always write with such grace.
Watt Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 9:27 PM
I agree with your statement of righteous anger having its place in thoughtful dialog (as I mentioned in stanza five), but when someone swings a sledgehammer in a scenario where a gentle tap would suffice, I'll take the tap every time.
Faulkner Avatar
December 24, 2021 at 8:16 AM
This should have been a POTD! John, your verse is so graceful and your message rings true, with all the upheaval lately we need to remember to respect another's viewpoint and find a way to disagree civily, as you rightly point out, isn't there a saying 'A kind word turns away wrath'
Watt Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 9:29 PM
Yes, I believe kindness and consideration are really what I'm shooting for here. Engaging in thoughtful conversation and showing mutual respect while disagreeing is a learned behavior; I say let's all start learning it! Thanks for your kind words.
Leiser Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 7:18 PM
Such wise words penned so eloquently in your poem, John. May “the words of my mouth and the meditation of my heart be acceptable, Oh Lord..”. God bless you! :)
Watt Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 9:30 PM
Thank you Laura for your kind affirmation and the reminder of that wonderful Scripture. God bless you, my friend.
Mcconnell Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 12:21 PM
Fine write John, good imagery with nice rhyme and showing wide words too. Hope all is well and safe, blessings,Gordon
Watt Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 9:30 PM
Thank you for stopping by with your uplifting comment, Gordon.
Y. Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 11:08 AM
WoW! John, Well said and well done. I agree, with your message my friend. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
Watt Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 9:31 PM
Thank you Alexis. Your words are always so uplifting and are a great encouragement to me.
Nicole Avatar
December 22, 2021 at 8:15 PM
"When I hear thunder's crash, I flee" There is a beautiful message within this simple thought. The entire poem holds so much truth. Words can either hurt or heal. That old saying comes to mind.. "Think, before you speak". The same goes for writing. Another true statement- Silence is Golden. It really is. (Speaking from experience). I have one more that I believe fits perfectly. "If you can't say anything nice, don't say anything at all". Wisdom comes with age. Doing the same thing again and again, expecting a different result, it's not gonna happen. You have expressed this so beautifully. My best to you, my dear sweet friend. Hugs, Brandy
Watt Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 9:31 PM
I agree with all you say, Brandy. Thank you for being a blessing of wisdom and kindness.
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December 22, 2021 at 7:45 PM
Wonderful message! I enjoyed reading! Happy holidays! - Nathasha
Watt Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 9:32 PM
Thank you, Nathasha. It was good to hear from you again.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 2:17 PM
We are in the realm of Art! In the world of words! In the presence of Artists! In the den of poets! In the sensitivity of beautiful souls and sensibility of the wise! How fine and elevated is your poetry, John! How lofty is your message! Thank you so much for adding a lot of Beauty into our world of poetry and for sharing such a gem! Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! My deepest regards and blessings.
Bauer Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 12:25 PM
beautifully expressed, john!
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 9:48 AM
You could not have expressed this more beautifully John. I so agree. Poetry should be about everything but personal attacks. That is the beauty of the art. Blessings and Mele Kalikimaka my friend. xxoo
Lawless Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 8:34 AM
"I HEAR YOUR THUNDER, NOT YOUR WORDS"...brilliant....
Messina Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 5:39 AM
So right you are...Great write, John. Merry Christmas to you and yours. And Also, wishing you a very Happy Birthday young man!!
Cunningham Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 2:06 AM
Great message in your verse John, a very happy Christmas to you and your family. Tom
Logan Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 1:15 AM
You are a sage that more poets should heed. John, you have the voice of reason, and everyone needs to be more reasonable.
Allison Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 12:18 AM
cant agree more John:-) hugs Jan xx
Vaso Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 12:14 AM
Very well said!
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