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City Self Versus Suburbia Self

when I get to the city I am on auto pilot if a murder happened I would be no witness I do not see people when I leave the suburbs I walk for blocks in crying tennis shoes wishing I worked somewhere else Have you seen this person? A detective could ask He could put me under a spotlight It would help me not I might as well be passing cattle I do not make eye contact or retain who the others are my city self is not friendly or kind I reserve my humanity for the suburbs where I pass no one without comment the consummate neighbor and friend there

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Date: 4/20/2021 1:29:00 PM
ha! i'm more like gershon in this case, caren! i think the city has to be in your blood for you to really love it but i like the way you've expressed your different selves in your poem...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/20/2021 4:59:00 PM
Thank you Ilene
Date: 4/19/2021 9:03:00 PM
Incredible! We react in precisely the opposite manner. The eyes and the I's have it. So revealing. Fascinating, Caren! :) gw
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/20/2021 4:59:00 PM
I ama country mouse, oh city mouse.

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