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The jam of guitars floods a moonlit trail Dizzy where tangy hyacinths delight… Folks prancing on rhumba beats to unveil My city agleam...near a harbor bright. Rithimus Divisa 9 Contest of Gregory R Barden Taken from the poem ' Pulse of Manila' Submitted 10/11/2020

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Jennifer Fenn

Date: 3/8/2021 1:55:00 PM

Wow! I want to go to Manila!

John Hamilton

Date: 10/12/2020 12:50:00 PM

Sounds like a great place Nette from your description, a wonderfully phrased poem. I know why Greg loves Manila, most of his music fans are from there, did you know he's working on a new song for his album called Filipina girl?

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/12/2020 10:35:00 AM

I can feel the soul of your city in your words, Nette - the guitars, fragrance of the hyacinth, the rhumba beat and the lights reflected in the water and in the action expressed in floods, dizzy, prancing, agleam. Congratulations on your well deserved win!

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/12/2020 9:11:00 AM

As always, Nette, your graceful pen has the power to sweep me up and away with beautiful imagery and emotion. I love the vibrant and proud spirit of this piece. Congratulations for your excellent win.. ~Susan

Silent One

Date: 10/12/2020 7:02:00 AM

Nice imagery in only four lines... Awesome.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/12/2020 6:40:00 AM

So beautiful Nette! Congratulations :)

Beata Agustin

Date: 10/12/2020 5:54:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, and the photo likewise. God bless you.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/12/2020 4:30:00 AM

Exquisite write about Manila, Nette, and such a worthy winner - I love that city, (and that country) - congratulations, and thanks for taking the time to enter my Rithimus Divisa 9 contest. Blessings! :o) <3

Nette Onclaud
Date: 3/23/2021 12:20:00 AM

i've been out,for s while... will send you a pm when i get the time... thanks, greg... huggs!

John Castellenas

Date: 10/12/2020 12:31:00 AM

Beautiful photo and amazing description for the city of your birth. A wonderful poem shared dear Nette.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/12/2020 12:07:00 AM

Sounds like a wonderful place Nette, by the sea. Hope you're well Tom