Home » Poems » Raul Moreno » City of Clouds

City of Clouds

Clouded...city streets,
Cumulous...community;
Beauty swelling up.

naturehaiku

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

James Fraser

May 2, 2009 at 5:17 PM

The skies the limit with the thought in this poem. McWow, James

Tyler Martin

April 27, 2009 at 10:10 PM

On this one I like the title and first line.

Lena Townsend

April 25, 2009 at 11:57 PM

I think you would have loved the sky I saw earlier this evening, well, last evening now, LOL... It was amazing and so inspiring though it turned frightening quite quickly as sirens blared and the tornado touched down just a few miles from my home. This is a great write filled with great imagery. Awesome work. Smiles from Lolita

Carolyn Devonshire

April 25, 2009 at 12:05 PM

Wow, Raul! You soar to great heights in this haiku. Love the thought of a "cumulous community." Awesome!

Brian Strand

April 25, 2009 at 10:56 AM

Beautiful contrast in thios onre Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comment

Abe Lopez

April 25, 2009 at 9:51 AM

i too enjoy the building of thunderstorms ....great job!!!!

Frank F. Atanacio

April 25, 2009 at 9:28 AM

this is so right on!

Michael Jordan

April 25, 2009 at 8:44 AM

Raul my friend God Bless you this morning - Loved your haiku - Where I live a traffic jam is two cars meeting at one of the three stoplights - God Bless, MJ