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City of Clouds

Clouded...city streets, Cumulous...community; Beauty swelling up.

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James Fraser

Date: 5/2/2009 5:17:00 PM

The skies the limit with the thought in this poem. McWow, James

Tyler Martin

Date: 4/27/2009 10:10:00 PM

On this one I like the title and first line.

Lena Townsend

Date: 4/25/2009 11:57:00 PM

I think you would have loved the sky I saw earlier this evening, well, last evening now, LOL... It was amazing and so inspiring though it turned frightening quite quickly as sirens blared and the tornado touched down just a few miles from my home. This is a great write filled with great imagery. Awesome work. Smiles from Lolita

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/25/2009 12:05:00 PM

Wow, Raul! You soar to great heights in this haiku. Love the thought of a "cumulous community." Awesome!

Brian Strand

Date: 4/25/2009 10:56:00 AM

Beautiful contrast in thios onre Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comment

Abe Lopez

Date: 4/25/2009 9:51:00 AM

i too enjoy the building of thunderstorms ....great job!!!!

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 4/25/2009 9:28:00 AM

this is so right on!

Michael Jordan

Date: 4/25/2009 8:44:00 AM

Raul my friend God Bless you this morning - Loved your haiku - Where I live a traffic jam is two cars meeting at one of the three stoplights - God Bless, MJ

Christopher Higgins

Date: 4/25/2009 8:13:00 AM

very interesting haiku Raul...i was so drawn into it..well done.

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 4/25/2009 7:03:00 AM

Keep fascinating your readers.

Date: 4/25/2009 6:43:00 AM

Nice use of alliteration that adds rhythm to this poem. Interesting interaction between life and nature. Enjoyed this one. Karen