City Life

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Sedoka
The Japanese-inspired sedoka consists of 6 lines with a syllable count of 5-7-7/ 5-7-7, unrhymed. The first 3 lines speak of a situation/ scene. The last 3 lines depict a response/reaction with the poem leading to a unified, complete thought.

City Life concrete jungle trails lure predators on the prowl --- posh picturesque parks proven hunting grounds only fools frequent nature --- green leafy trees shade secrets (Sedoka) 11-01-2020

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/7/2021 8:28:00 AM

Good one to inform about what life can be like in a large city. It is sad that predators will take advantage of people in such situations. Congrats on your winner. Sara

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/10/2021 10:25:00 AM

Thanks Sara, I appreciate you wonderful comments my friend, Emile.