City Geometry

CITY GEOMETRY

I’m on big town
Inserted
Yea, transplanted
Within its swaying wave
Of box and angle

Where my self-identity
Is something throbbing
Upward gazing
Arrowing
To sky points

So, it’s confusing
The hate-love factor
Stiffness
Restriction
Formal sharpness of angle

A quite eye bewildering sight
This swirling circumference
Of a giant
Fractured
Circle 

And oh!
The Stravinskyish
Jagged continuity
Of line
Of dissonance

For distance
I follow parallels
Lines receding
With absolute straightness

There a promise of
Those cherished
Fading meadows
Of nature’s roundness
Her natural sweetness

Suddenly!
I take a ninety-degree angle of turn
With mandatory city goose step
Toward sanity
Toward home

Dave Austin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/14/2016 2:23:00 PM
Oh, I miss the natural roundness. "The Stravinskyish Jagged continuity Of line Of dissonance", is like an architectural collision "Of a giant Fractured Circle" Enjoying this write, Daver!! Hugs, with love, Mikki
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Date: 4/16/2016 8:00:00 PM
Love to read your poetry, Daver. That last part really hits home TOWARD SANITY, toward home.
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Daver Austin
Date: 4/17/2016 10:53:00 AM
Thanks, buddy. Poetry is so great in this crazy, insane world. Love, daver
Date: 4/15/2016 4:22:00 PM
Yes home can be one's sanctuary daver, like how you have written this, true art in each word...
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Daver Austin
Date: 4/16/2016 1:57:00 PM
Thanks, Harry. It must be the geometry. I like smooth, wide open spaces, empty of confusion and noise. Love, daver
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