city awakens

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the city awakens as the sun slowly rises gears set in motion AP: Honorable Mention 2025 Posted on April 16, 2025

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/17/2025 8:44:00 PM

Ready, set -- Ignite! The sun's a better battery and 'don't need no sparkplug,' as they say here in Chicago, home of the worst reading, writing, and speaking scores for public school students in urban America. And that's pretty baaaaaaaaaad!! ~ Silver Tonsils

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/19/2025 6:25:00 AM

Each day has so much potential for turning the page and doing something wonderful !