City

sun setting swiftly
city eyes are red with fire… 
giants heading east
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Maverick Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 1:24 PM
Full of life here David best wishes on the H M..'
Mohn Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 7:16 PM
Thanks Joe...glad you stopped for a look :)
Andresen Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 3:01 AM
- Another contest sponsored by: Giorgio V. - "Impress me IV" - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING, DAVID. - ENJOYABLE TO READ YOURS AND A PLEASURE TO PARTICIPATE :))) - Anne-Lise :)
Tsiluma Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 5:33 AM
Beautiful imagery! Well written. Sun setting in the west and giants heading east - gives a picture of constant conflict.
Mohn Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 10:01 AM
Thanks so much Vicky :)
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