Notes About The Poem

Circus Days

I ran away to the circus at the age of two
on a sad day when it was raining.
At first, I didn't know what I should do, 
not having the proper training.

I started with an elephant and began to scrub.
His skin was leathery and rough, 
but found I could continue with a gentler rub,
when his skin became smooth enough.
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April 22, 2025 at 6:22 PM
The magic touch David you have that elephant loved. Michael
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April 23, 2025 at 9:23 AM
Haha - thanks Michael!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 22, 2025 at 5:33 PM
Love that feel of the first day! Interesting snippet of time.
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April 23, 2025 at 9:23 AM
Hi Kim - thanks for the visit!
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