Circles Turn

Hoe bites, turning earth
Rain falls bringing life anew
Cool on sunburned skin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 3, 2010 at 11:50 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Jack. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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June 2, 2010 at 6:09 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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May 31, 2010 at 5:35 PM
I am nursing a sun burn, sounds refreshing!
Joseph Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 3:23 PM
Congrats, this is wonderful, I can smell the earth - well done
Brown Avatar
April 8, 2010 at 3:11 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Jack. Love, Carol
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April 5, 2010 at 7:33 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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April 4, 2010 at 4:40 PM
enjoyed reading today, good one!!
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April 4, 2010 at 3:55 PM
Much captured in just three lines. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep on writing!! Karen
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April 4, 2010 at 3:27 PM
congrats on being featured this week. Nice little haiku! LUv, Andrea
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April 4, 2010 at 1:35 PM
Jack, many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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April 4, 2010 at 11:02 AM
Wow! Beautiful Haiku. Congratulations. Ernilando
Brown Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 5:17 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jack. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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February 21, 2010 at 3:44 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creative writes with us all .. as this delight tonight.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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