Circles

circles

night of the blue moon
the second time it calls
on this gentle, indigo canvas    
stars, we of the fiery hearts
we are lost daughters
the hidden ones.

air a hypnotic brew
cedar and sage
sweet grass and incense
cleanse the sacred space
?fill it with barely audible chanting
lifted upon the birch smoke 
invite our grandmothers return
 
drum sounds echo through
borrowed bodies 
heart beat of mother earth 
synchronous with all hearts
each woman stares unblinking 
into pirouetting flame
secret musings,
unshared wisdom

we are the unborn
come to tell the old tales
lest they be lost forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 10/25/2017 1:19:00 PM
It is my pleasure Patricia.
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Date: 10/25/2017 12:57:00 PM
It is good for women to gather amidst the feminine power of nature. This is a truly beautiful write.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/25/2017 1:15:00 PM
Thank you Richard, welcome to my home.
Date: 10/25/2017 8:51:00 AM
Yes yes yes :) Goddess bless! A lovely day to you High Poetess (and I don't mean stoned ;)
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/25/2017 9:23:00 AM
LOL you would have loved it Maureen! I am so glad you understand.
Date: 10/25/2017 7:33:00 AM
Beautiful poem in the hearts of women! Great write, Pat!
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Date: 10/25/2017 7:32:00 AM
a BEAUTIFUL PORM IN THE HEARTS OF WOMEN! Great Write, Patricia.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/25/2017 9:21:00 AM
Thank you Ralph. You got my name right! It makes me happy as names are very important thank you again. Patricia
Date: 10/25/2017 3:24:00 AM
Wow, wow, what an amazing write my friend! You have surely written such a emotive piece here! I surely enjoyed reading this fine poem, full of awesome splendor and tremendous references to Mother Earth (do you capitalize that?)! What an expressive poem, Great Work!! P.S. The poem Demon Dance was purely fiction, it was a Halloween poem and did not reflect anything about my life. Just thought you should know.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/25/2017 8:16:00 AM
hank you for the comment and reassurance.
Date: 10/24/2017 8:19:00 PM
I can almost feel the very essence of Mother Earth when reading this poem; it conjures up vivid images of Totems, camp fires, wigwams, and huge, dark skies almost totally obliterated by massive clusters of brilliant stars...simply wonderful, Patricia...absolutely wonderful! :) john P.s Hope you are warmly snuggled up against that cold blast you mentioned. Night - night! :)
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/24/2017 9:19:00 PM
It was a magical night shared by a group of women. Thank you for reading and commenting so astutely. have a good shift.
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