Circles

Moon is drawing circles
and you are drawing circles
and you drift farer and farer.
You will never be my husband after all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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October 21, 2016 at 3:25 AM
Extraordinary, May! Some relationships do seem to drift in circles. The final line reveals a deep sadness. A very good short verse! Hugs, Carolyn
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October 18, 2016 at 11:03 PM
WELL DONE, ORIDNARY M..SKAT
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October 9, 2016 at 6:58 AM
Ordinary, very good. Linda
May Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 8:28 AM
thank you so much for reading and commenting on my poem Linda
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