Circles

knee stiff unrelents
enjoying the year of rust -
oil can or bust
for i still give chase
as grandson circles

1/4/2021

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/4/2021 7:57:00 PM

Your delightful imagery has created a charming scene, Kim. Excepting your poor knee, of course. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/5/2021 3:07:00 AM

Thank you!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/4/2021 5:37:00 PM

Always love your tankas. Five lines that shine every time! ~ The Tin Man (Can you spare a little oil?!)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/4/2021 6:45:00 PM

Right! If only that worked! O-i-l can...oil can!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2021 2:52:00 PM

so funny, as grandson circles. Take care, poor grandma!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/4/2021 4:17:00 PM

giggle... thanks!

Eve Roper

Date: 1/4/2021 12:32:00 PM

I know the feeling :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/4/2021 4:17:00 PM

Oh, it is not fun!

Judy Ball

Date: 1/4/2021 12:02:00 PM

Ooohoohoo! I feel your pain and can relate. I just refuse to let the pain slow me down. If you give in to it it has a way of getting worse. Love this one. God Bless, JB Thanks so much for the well wishes. Am getting stronger.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/4/2021 4:16:00 PM

Let’s hope not! I stretch it out and go go go! Blessings, sweet lady!