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White hot stars twinkling bright, in a black ink sky spreading night while pink clouds in heavenly space spread love from those who are circling above. Waves of green glowing, mysterious and beautiful through the night in circles of delight with blue moon circling round as we gaze upward at the profound. Fading in and fading out, the warmth of the sun’s fire encircles and feeds our desire. Floating, sailing, shooting, through space We live eternally together in a circular place. By: Carole O'Terry Duet Copyright: 11/15/2018 “All Rights Reserved”

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Date: 3/13/2020 12:06:00 AM
A Great read skilful descriptions
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/23/2020 5:21:00 PM
Thank you, Simon. I hope you watched and listened to the great video by Pink Floyd. It was so beautiful and inspirational. Carole :D
Date: 12/18/2018 5:52:00 PM
I love anything of the cosmos, and this is a gem ... enjoyed it thoroughly, My Friend - blessings to you, and keep up the great work! Happy Holidays and Merry Christmas! :-) <3
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Carole Duet
Date: 12/18/2018 8:50:00 PM
Thank you, Greg. I'm so happy that you enjoyed it. Blessings to you too and hope you have a lovely holiday season. Carole :D
Date: 12/4/2018 5:39:00 PM
Hello Carole, this poem is so lovely. I felt like i was on a journey through space. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/5/2018 3:18:00 PM
Merry Christmas to you as well.All the best for the New Year.
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Carole Duet
Date: 12/5/2018 2:41:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene. I'm so glad you took that "journey through space" with me. Merry Christmas! Carole :D
Date: 11/18/2018 10:39:00 AM
Hi Carole, a beautiful write from your pen. This is such a creative write. Heavenly grace, a beauty in space. Loved the flow and the content. Your poetic gem does sing in the mind. Have a wonderful Sunday. hugs....Mike. XX. A fave.
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Carole Duet
Date: 11/18/2018 1:13:00 PM
Thank you, Vlad, for your generous comment and for the FAVE. Carole :D
Date: 11/18/2018 3:18:00 AM
Colourful galactic poem..Enjoyed the rhymes..
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Carole Duet
Date: 11/18/2018 1:11:00 PM
Thank you, ZZ. So glad you liked it. Carole :D
Date: 11/17/2018 6:17:00 PM
Captivating rhyme, f!ow and content creatively meshed an intriguing poem. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Carole Duet
Date: 11/17/2018 11:31:00 PM
Thank you, CayCay. What a lovely compliment. Carole :D
Date: 11/17/2018 4:35:00 PM
Very lovely, Carole. These lines project such a powerful sense of movement! Regards // paul
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Carole Duet
Date: 11/17/2018 11:31:00 PM
Thank you, Paul. Glad you liked it. Carole :D
Date: 11/15/2018 5:25:00 PM
Beautiful, intriguing sights and sounds in your video..and your poem is equally reflective of the world above..very creative and well done, Carole.
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Carole Duet
Date: 11/15/2018 5:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay! The music and video by Pink Floyd was so inspiring. Carole :D

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