Carole Duet Poet Free verse

Circles

White hot stars twinkling bright,
in a black ink sky spreading night
while pink clouds in heavenly space 
spread love
from those who are circling above.

Waves of green glowing, 
mysterious and beautiful
through the night in circles of delight
with blue moon circling round 
as we gaze upward at the profound.

Fading in and fading out,
the warmth of the sun’s fire
encircles and feeds our desire.
Floating, sailing, shooting, through space
We live eternally together in a circular place.


By:  Carole O'Terry Duet
Copyright:  11/15/2018
“All Rights Reserved”

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Simon King March 13, 2020 at 12:06 AM A Great read skilful descriptions Carole Duet March 23, 2020 at 5:21 PM Thank you, Simon. I hope you watched and listened to the great video by Pink Floyd. It was so beautiful and inspirational. Carole :D

Gregory Richard Barden December 18, 2018 at 5:52 PM I love anything of the cosmos, and this is a gem ... enjoyed it thoroughly, My Friend - blessings to you, and keep up the great work! Happy Holidays and Merry Christmas! :-) <3 Carole Duet December 18, 2018 at 8:50 PM Thank you, Greg. I'm so happy that you enjoyed it. Blessings to you too and hope you have a lovely holiday season. Carole :D

Darlene De Beaulieu December 4, 2018 at 5:39 PM Hello Carole, this poem is so lovely. I felt like i was on a journey through space. Have a nice evening my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu December 5, 2018 at 3:18 PM Merry Christmas to you as well.All the best for the New Year. Carole Duet December 5, 2018 at 2:41 PM Thank you, Darlene. I'm so glad you took that "journey through space" with me. Merry Christmas! Carole :D

Vladislav Raven November 18, 2018 at 10:39 AM Hi Carole, a beautiful write from your pen. This is such a creative write. Heavenly grace, a beauty in space. Loved the flow and the content. Your poetic gem does sing in the mind. Have a wonderful Sunday. hugs....Mike. XX. A fave. Carole Duet November 18, 2018 at 1:13 PM Thank you, Vlad, for your generous comment and for the FAVE. Carole :D

Silent One November 18, 2018 at 3:18 AM Colourful galactic poem..Enjoyed the rhymes.. Carole Duet November 18, 2018 at 1:11 PM Thank you, ZZ. So glad you liked it. Carole :D

CayCay Godwin November 17, 2018 at 6:17 PM Captivating rhyme, f!ow and content creatively meshed an intriguing poem. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Carole Duet November 17, 2018 at 11:31 PM Thank you, CayCay. What a lovely compliment. Carole :D

Paul Callus November 17, 2018 at 4:35 PM Very lovely, Carole. These lines project such a powerful sense of movement! Regards // paul Carole Duet November 17, 2018 at 11:31 PM Thank you, Paul. Glad you liked it. Carole :D

Vijay Pandit November 15, 2018 at 5:25 PM Beautiful, intriguing sights and sounds in your video..and your poem is equally reflective of the world above..very creative and well done, Carole. Carole Duet November 15, 2018 at 5:33 PM Thank you so much, Vijay! The music and video by Pink Floyd was so inspiring. Carole :D