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Circle Spin

Circle Spin Uncontrollable sin, Evils strapped in, a frantic live wire nervous has been. Uneffective questions, unanswered no intention, Pulitzer Prized Prisoner unpatented invention. Politicized Mutation of knowledge starvation, axis spun, uncircled Sun, life long probation... bmdavey@ 02/05/16

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/12/2016 9:43:00 AM

Hi, Brian...thanks for reading my comment. Luv...Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2016 7:10:00 AM

Hi Brian, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Evil is out there and spins us all in circles. awesome write... well I guess you are not around ....LOVE LINDA

Brian Davey
Date: 2/12/2016 2:52:00 AM

Oh my dear friend I am sorry but for some reason I missed this comment from you??? Thank you so much I value everything you teach and share with me. Better late than never right?