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Circle Ring

the circle ring has figures svelte, faerie forms here, walk in stealth, the inner light, reveals the wealth, such beauty of the night, perceived by inner sight, these tiniest of mites, a picture card is dealt... re: 'Woodland Path' Michelle Mac Donald Don Johnson

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Harry Horsman

Date: 8/17/2012 10:06:00 AM

love how this flows, Don, wonderful poem.

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/17/2012 9:33:00 AM

What an insightful write my friend! I just love the awesome way you delved into this write, with perfect description and ideas! What an incredible piece, Great Work!!

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/17/2012 8:49:00 AM

Fantastic write, Don. Love your rhyming and flow. Love, Kim

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 8/17/2012 7:13:00 AM

"a picture card is dealt", only because you know how to shuffle the pack.:) A soft and whimsical write, Don! Enjoying the images you've depicted here. Best wishes, Mikki