Circle of Love

Painful unrequited crush,
Mutual relationship.
The selfless caring parent,
Growing trust of child.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Hopkins Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 3:27 AM
Not quite able to get what you are saying here. Remember this could just be my low english skills
Hopkins-Drewer Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 3:28 PM
Please don't put yourself down. I was trying to describe a few of the types of love we experience during our lives, but due to the limits of the doditsu form, had to be very selective.
Hopkins Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 3:05 PM
short and sweet I liked it
Brownlee Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 8:58 AM
That says it all. Beautifully displayed love.
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