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written in 10 syllable 8 count to  dance in waves 

unrhymed quatrains 

Friendship cotton soft internal beauty the heart holds not looking blindly but should she find me adoring angel wings embracing dream of dreams shine Living at the bottom of a mountain in the hill moss among'st nature to watch and accept what life brings spellbound each day brings new treasures delight Dew into the deepest fountain springs forth one soul breathless frozen moment diamond pure ice crystal clear stunning a picture of you held captive Within the mind entering palace suite doors open the still of night beams pearl smiles on our dancing silver shadows together tango we let scream Into darkness shining where the goose lays a golden egg filled with riches sparkling liquid honey melting deep pure embraced warmly feelings crown you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/12/2015 8:52:00 AM
May the angels keep you safe and warm dear
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Date: 10/20/2015 2:33:00 PM
I don't think i can add to what Dorian has put Liam - stunningly beautiful my friend :-) hugs jan xx7
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Date: 10/20/2015 12:33:00 PM
Hi Liam!This is a most beautiful,romantic,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written!Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden pen.I just love it!Another very beautiful,romantic,dreamy, most enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautiful n' sweet!Great!Just superb!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just perfect!Excellent!Very delightful imagery!I just love your new poetry style in all too,Liam.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything,Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything.Always keeping you in my prayers,Liam.Keep your Faith!Please take good care of yourself always.Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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