Notes About The Poem

written in 10 syllable 8 count to  dance in waves 

unrhymed quatrains 

Circle Halo Rotates With Your Gem Light

Friendship cotton soft internal beauty
the heart holds not looking blindly 
but should she find me adoring angel 
wings embracing dream of dreams shine

Living at the bottom of a mountain 
in the hill moss among'st nature 
to watch and accept what life brings spellbound 
each day brings new treasures delight

Dew into the deepest fountain springs forth 
one soul breathless frozen moment
diamond pure ice crystal clear stunning 
a picture of you held captive

Within the mind entering palace suite
doors open the still of night beams 
pearl smiles on our dancing silver shadows 
together tango we let scream 

Into darkness shining where the goose lays 
a golden egg filled with riches 
sparkling liquid honey melting deep pure
embraced warmly feelings crown you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Haikutwinkle Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 8:52 AM
May the angels keep you safe and warm dear
Allison Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 2:33 PM
I don't think i can add to what Dorian has put Liam - stunningly beautiful my friend :-) hugs jan xx7
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 12:33 PM
Hi Liam!This is a most beautiful,romantic,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written!Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden pen.I just love it!Another very beautiful,romantic,dreamy, most enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautiful n' sweet!Great!Just superb!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just perfect!Excellent!Very delightful imagery!I just love your new poetry style in all too,Liam.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything,Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything.Always keeping you in my prayers,Liam.Keep your Faith!Please take good care of yourself always.Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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