Cinquain Six

Face
contorted smile
trying to disguise
the pain that underlies
mask
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Konos Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 3:15 PM
Cinquain Six... Richard I now dub thee Prince Cinquain VI..... for someone who has not done Cinquain in the past....You sure are doing a fine job! Congrats on this one....
Lamoureux Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 6:25 PM
Thanks Judy, you are kind. I like your avatar your picture makes me smile because it seems joyful.
Dietrich Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 2:36 PM
yes, so many people wear this kind of mask, Richard!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 3:11 PM
Being ourselves is much more rewarding even though it invoves some risk.
Manassian Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 1:28 PM
:) :') True.....
Lamoureux Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 3:12 PM
thanks for being the first to read and comment. Hugs Rick
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