Cinquain Fourteen

Lost under pile of red tape hoping I will be found

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/22/2013 11:43:00 PM

Is this a murder scene or are hiding beneath of box of red tape? Are you a lost teddy bear in a Christmas box, covered in red tape? There seems to be infinite possibilities with this one because it's so vague... definitely a strong feeling of imprisonment, however!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/23/2013 6:27:00 AM

I hadn't considered these options *lol* I like the way your mind works. I will choose to leave it to your imagination. That is the beauty of art it filters through the person who sees it and takes on their shape.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/22/2013 9:17:00 AM

No complaints! Thanks for your concearn though.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/22/2013 8:52:00 AM

You will be! :) I'm sure of it. Better things ahead for you....