Cinquain Fourteen

Lost
under pile
of red tape
hoping I will be
found
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Hicks Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 11:43 PM
Is this a murder scene or are hiding beneath of box of red tape? Are you a lost teddy bear in a Christmas box, covered in red tape? There seems to be infinite possibilities with this one because it's so vague... definitely a strong feeling of imprisonment, however!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 6:27 AM
I hadn't considered these options *lol* I like the way your mind works. I will choose to leave it to your imagination. That is the beauty of art it filters through the person who sees it and takes on their shape.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 9:17 AM
No complaints! Thanks for your concearn though.
Manassian Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 8:52 AM
You will be! :) I'm sure of it. Better things ahead for you....
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