Cinquain As It Is Today

Love 
means nothing
without you here 
my life is finished
Stay!


"Special thanks" to Sima Mittal for defining Cinquain
Line 1 has one word (the title).
Line 2 has two words that describe the title. 
Line 3 has three words that tell the action.
Line 4 has four words that express the feeling.
Line 5 has one word which recalls the title.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Ehlinger Avatar
May 5, 2013 at 2:58 PM
Saw/Your words/I cannot say/Just how I feel/Awe?!
Manassian Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 2:37 PM
Lovely Judy! Such depth of meaning. Maybe I will try this form sometime. Thanks for the explanation! Hugs!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 10:31 PM
Hi Judy I thought I would try my hand at the opposite end of the spectrum. First time I have seen this form. Thanks for posting the instructions. I enjoyed your poem.
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