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Cinnamon skies

Okay, here’s a shot at those lyrics, aiming for that Prince-meets-Brandy-ballad-with-a-Usher-hook vibe. I've opted for an AABB rhyme scheme with some internal rhymes to add to the flow. Title: Cinnamon Skies (For Him) (Intro - Soft synth pads, a low bass line, and a light drum machine beat – very 90s R&B) (Verse 1 - Prince-esque vocals, slightly breathy and melodic) Streetlights blur, a hazy gold, on my way to the pump Thinking 'bout you, future unfolding, a gentle, subtle thump He showed his fam, so soon, a shock, but felt like home, you see Talkin' life, where we goin’, destiny, and you meant for me (Pre-Chorus - Beat becomes a little more prominent, slight vocal harmonies come in) He asked about my faith, my dreams, showed such soft respect Never pressure, just intention, true love we connect (Chorus - Usher-esque catchy hook, layered vocals, more emphasis on the beat) Gotta get him, gotta get him, while the love’s so real and true He's a keeper, trust the feelin', what he feelin’ for you (Verse 2 - Vocals become slightly more spoken word, still melodic) Cinnamon dad, a sweet embrace, a fleeting, stolen kiss Fueling up, for that precious place and that love I can't dismiss Values deep, he spoke with fire, a vision we both shared Future plans, burning desire, a feeling, well, it's rare (Pre-Chorus - Beat picks up again, harmonies a bit stronger) He honored every line I drew, cherished every side of me This ain't just a fling, it's true, the man I was meant to see (Chorus - Usher-esque catchy hook, layered vocals, more emphasis on the beat) Gotta get him, gotta get him, while the love’s so real and true He's a keeper, trust the feelin', what he feelin’ for you (Bridge - Ballad feel, vocal harmonies layered, beat drops to just a basic pulse) Goddess Abundance, blessed this path, intertwined our fates No doubt, no turning back, sealed by love, no debates Early on, showing his clan, that I was meant to stay A plan so grand, a holy span, now that future’s on display. (Chorus - Usher-esque with a slight vocal run at the end, powerful and full) Gotta get him, gotta get him, while the love’s so real and true He's a keeper, trust the feelin', what he feelin’ for you, oh yeaaaaah! (Outro - Synth pads and a soft bass fade out, with a final echo of “for you…”)

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