Jan Allison figured out I needed one more line. The first line I give her full credit for, and thank you Jan!
Fresh from the Oven Warm oozing frosting Warm melted butter Soaking into bread Salivating me So delicious Fabulous and Delectable Cinnamon roll Delightful Brown sugar Crunchy top My mouth Waters Yum!
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