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cinereal

beneath a sullen moon
silence hovered
my mind meandered
the two soon
inextricably
entwined



AP: 3rd place 2025, Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on January 10, 2025 to BRIAN STRAND'S contest 'A 2025 POSTED POEM' - RANKED 3RD

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2025

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Sara Kendrick Date: 1/12/2025 7:10:00 AM Congratulations on your winner. I got a chuckle about the silence and mind becoming intertwined. Way to go. Sara K Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 1/12/2025 11:51:00 AM Thanks, Sara ~ have a lovely day

JCB Brul Date: 1/12/2025 1:16:00 AM This is exquisitely beautiful! Brevity at its best. Congratulations, dear Line. Stay creative! ^___^ JCB Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 1/12/2025 11:51:00 AM Thank you very much, JCB ~

Ink Empress Date: 1/11/2025 11:47:00 AM Dear line, love the picture youv used here, and also the softness of your words and how they flow is just so very beautiful and soulful. I love “ silence hovered” “ my mind meandered” the subtle flow of alliterations there is stunning! There is a pinch of melancholy in this that resonates. Congratulations on your win in brians contest. Sending you light always Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 1/11/2025 4:27:00 PM Most appreciated ~ thank you

Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/10/2025 3:06:00 PM loneliness is an abyss…my friend at church cried…lost her husband a few years ago…said I feel so alone. Hugs of angels and the comfort of the Holy Spirit, prayed your way. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 1/10/2025 4:42:00 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Kim.

Christine K Munsell Date: 1/10/2025 7:48:00 AM Beautiful theme of oneness - in so few words. Very nice! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 1/10/2025 1:19:00 PM most appreciated, thanks ~

Dean Wood Date: 1/10/2025 7:22:00 AM Line, I really like this poem. It pulled me right in . Great imagery. It has the feel of a haiku or other Japanese form, few words but leaves you pondering, and reminiscing. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 1/10/2025 1:19:00 PM thank you very much, Dean ~ most appreciated