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Cindy

Peroxide blonde and covered in petals, Bleach kills flowers - She’s less softener than metal A body rooted in pride, trying to run, Jackal and hide. There’s some double entendres, catch them if you can, There’s something about her, try to find it, you’ll both be damned. To Cinderella she’s her own step sister, Crying out for love, afraid of those who’d listen. Just someone out there longing for a cause in existence, Just someone out there, longing for a reason to stay persistent

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Date: 9/13/2020 6:16:00 AM
I found the link for your page on Instagram. Your work is truly fantastic, I even made an account just to tell you!! By far my favourite poem
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Dylan Dhinsa
Date: 9/13/2020 6:18:00 AM
Thank you for the kind words
Date: 9/13/2020 5:09:00 AM
I love this. The line ‘Trying to run, jackal and hide’, is amazing. I first felt it was a grammar error, then it clicked that it’s a double entendre. Truly fantastic. You should be very proud
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Dylan Dhinsa
Date: 9/13/2020 6:18:00 AM
I’m glad you appreciate this, very kind. Thank you
Date: 8/10/2020 7:53:00 AM
Dylan, Very nice to find this Rhyme that's lost a slipper. Really, really enjoyed the line 'To Cinderella she’s her own step sister'. -Richard
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Dylan Dhinsa
Date: 9/13/2020 6:19:00 AM
Thank you for the kind words Sir. -Dylan