The Whiskey Taster’s Flavor Guide

Cigarette Smoke

On a warm, dew-weakened day,
Watching the grey void of a lost
Sense, anxious moments recline
On whiffs of ancestral propitiations
When rafters regain possession of
Filched roast fish, balanced with
The fumes of a wild dance heckled
By chokes of a chagrined weekend.
Who rises faster than smokes of a
Low tar, ascending
Gently,
Whimsically,
Lazily,
With rings of white life
Extinguished through banalities,
Through clamoured waste? . . .
Such rise — gay, sensuous rise
Of the thin beam,
Goes with every thread of meaning
Long since posted on the banner of
Meaningful dreams.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Daniels Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 6:41 AM
Wow, this is a mouthful, Nkwachukwu ! U are exceptionally observant. dew weakened day is very unusual metaphor / whiffs of ancestral propitiation... exquisite description : fav for me. Blessings-you write like a philosopher.
Ogbuagu Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 8:24 AM
Ghairo Daniels, I am deeply pleased to read your supremely kind and generous comment on my poem. Thanks a great deal. Have a pleasant and most fulfilling new week. Stay blessed.
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