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Yellow aura in the back drop, Dwells within the well confined prop, Infects soft shadows in brunette; Seduced they light up the silhouette. Wings exposed to the sensations, Quiver in anticipations, Etched as feather strings of delight; Long to fuse with this earthly sight. Free me from all worldly bond age; For I dream to fly in my craze.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/2/2011 3:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest again Jai. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/3/2010 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry x2 making it through the first round Jai. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/4/2010 7:09:00 PM
Good use of rhyme and imagery to share your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 5/3/2010 9:38:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/3/2010 4:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup. May you have many more features Jai. Love,Carol
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