Ciao

Yellow aura in the back drop,
Dwells within the well confined prop,
Infects soft shadows in brunette;
Seduced they light up the silhouette.

Wings exposed to the sensations, 
Quiver in anticipations,
Etched as feather strings of delight;
Long to fuse with this earthly sight.

Free me from all worldly bond age;
For I dream to fly in my craze.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 2, 2011 at 3:39 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest again Jai. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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June 3, 2010 at 10:50 AM
Congratulations on your poetry x2 making it through the first round Jai. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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May 4, 2010 at 7:09 PM
Good use of rhyme and imagery to share your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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May 3, 2010 at 9:38 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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May 3, 2010 at 4:32 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup. May you have many more features Jai. Love,Carol
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