Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

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Churning of Holistic Sunrise

Churning of holistic sunrise,
churched by God above.
Preaching of vivid truth.
Gleaming eyes see it.
No words — baby crawls
into Father’s lap.

In passing of years
fiery reds, tangerines —
lost in translation;
the tongue lies.

At death’s incline,
impending groom
holds up the globe of the sky.
Like a newborn baby
with no teeth,
an innocent smile
resumes.

12/29/2020

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Paige Hind September 2, 2024 at 6:42 PM Wow, this is art...beautiful depiction of life, seems it's going by at the speed of light...

Caren Krutsinger December 29, 2020 at 2:20 PM The cycle of life identified so beautifully in this fantastic missive. Kim Rodrigues December 29, 2020 at 5:32 PM Thank you, Caren!

Victor Buhagiar December 29, 2020 at 10:00 AM God is merciful and will take care of us, till our time comes. But I always pray for a happy death. Lovely poem. ~~ Kim Rodrigues December 29, 2020 at 5:33 PM God bless you, dear sir!

Rob Levasseur December 29, 2020 at 8:55 AM Interesting and thought provoking. I liked the quiet tone of voice in this as well. Kim Rodrigues December 29, 2020 at 5:33 PM Thank you, Rob!