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Churning of Holistic Sunrise

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Churning of holistic sunrise, churched by God above. Preaching of vivid truth. Gleaming eyes see it. No words — baby crawls into Father’s lap. In passing of years fiery reds, tangerines — lost in translation; the tongue lies. At death’s incline, impending groom holds up the globe of the sky. Like a newborn baby with no teeth, an innocent smile resumes. 12/29/2020

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Date: 12/29/2020 2:20:00 PM
The cycle of life identified so beautifully in this fantastic missive.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/29/2020 5:32:00 PM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 12/29/2020 10:00:00 AM
God is merciful and will take care of us, till our time comes. But I always pray for a happy death. Lovely poem. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/29/2020 5:33:00 PM
God bless you, dear sir!
Date: 12/29/2020 8:55:00 AM
Interesting and thought provoking. I liked the quiet tone of voice in this as well.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/29/2020 5:33:00 PM
Thank you, Rob!

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