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~time is the ultimate teacher, unfortunately i kills all of its students~ my footprints indent the sand as i hike towards the structure, darkened by the neglect of human care and the love of the ocean waves that lap against it, but she stands tall for it is her time to leave, and as my footprints indented in the soft sand are greeted by those loving, caring waves they disappear, i look back for her and all is new and the waves begins to embrace the church once more Ethan Plummer the church by the ocean 9-27-11

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Date: 10/6/2011 9:49:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest Ethan, I am sure many more wins will come your way
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Date: 10/5/2011 5:28:00 PM
Congrats Ethan on a wonderful win in this contest with lovely words of poetry luv..
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Ethan Plummer
Date: 10/5/2011 7:41:00 PM
this was my first win/ placing since i started poetry soup last week so i am really happy about it
Date: 10/5/2011 10:32:00 AM
This is great. Love your opening statement Ethan. Congratulations
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Ethan Plummer
Date: 10/5/2011 7:41:00 PM
thank you for your support and congrats :)
Date: 10/5/2011 8:32:00 AM
Good writing. Looking forward to your next winner.
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Ethan Plummer
Date: 10/5/2011 7:40:00 PM
thank you for your support and congrats :)
Date: 10/4/2011 3:23:00 PM
Very poetic work..Enjoyed reading..Congrats..Sara
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Ethan Plummer
Date: 10/5/2011 7:42:00 PM
well thank you sara i enjoy reading your poetry too
Date: 10/4/2011 1:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Ethan in "The Church By The Ocean" contest. Love, Carol
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Ethan Plummer
Date: 10/5/2011 7:43:00 PM
thank you carol for all of the wonderful comments you have given me and my work

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