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Chubby Love

You like most carbs and sweets But you hate bitter gourd, When you type your shout outs, tweets Sixteen letters entered, ten letters Are being alone and cold As you say hello and wave your hands Your triceps also say hi, I’m glad that you lose negative pounds Oh my darling! : ) at least you try… Your favorite place at the mall Is the fitting room, But you shine Like flowers in full bloom When we walk together with hands Embrace to each other, We form the date of our monthsary, Number “10” and forever I don’t afraid in calm, cold days and nights Because I know that you are here, by my side, You’re my pillow, my blanket, my Bed Your tummy makes it complete, My future wife, I will love you till the end… Love, even though you have your own measurements And even rings require more gold, diamonds Personalize… Especially for you… You’re so sexy… and I’m happy That God gave me the most beautiful girl, My heart… My destiny…

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Date: 5/25/2014 12:28:00 PM
Hello Jhucel, This was a good poem, that I enjoyed reading. Hope to read more of your work. Congrats on being one of the "Best New Poets" Take Care, Jess
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Date: 5/21/2014 8:36:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this, I liked the part "lose negative pounds" that was an interesting wording :)
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Jhucel Del Rosario
Date: 5/23/2014 2:10:00 AM
: )....Thank you Bridget..
Date: 5/15/2014 2:13:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem indeed. And I've seen you've written a Poem in Tagalog too!! So exciting. Tagalog languag is sooooooooooo good. I love it.
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Jhucel Del Rosario
Date: 5/16/2014 7:44:00 AM
Thank you for appreciating my work, my friend... yup Filipino really rocks.. Godbless: )
Date: 5/15/2014 9:31:00 AM
HA HA I so love this...... Jhucel, have yourself a sweet day....SKAT
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Date: 5/13/2014 7:28:00 PM
The body is but a distraction. What matters is the soul, yes? I think women who carry themselves well and are at ease are the sexiest creatures in the world! As long as she's happy and as long as she has you, nothing can go wrong. :D I read this last night on our group and decided to comment here para may rating! LOL
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Jhucel Del Rosario
Date: 5/16/2014 7:45:00 AM
Thanks sir jake!!!!
Date: 5/12/2014 9:57:00 AM
this is aaaaaahhhh.... SO SWEET ,PARE!!!! ..:O)) ang angas nito.. haha... You have her so complete... you are so lucky!!! ..no need to buy a matress, she completes it!! ..dang it!! ... great and funny write.. You got me, jhucel.. made me remember of my one poem.. haha... :O)) You both are perfect 10!!!!
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Date: 5/12/2014 6:08:00 AM
love it.. :) this a sweet endearing write.. :) truly it's not how looks one appear that imprisons the heart it's what in the heart that hugs and jails.. :D great write.. :) , GBU olive.. :)
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Date: 5/11/2014 11:29:00 PM
Dang Girl, Nothing Shy Here Baby: Wow....Love, Jeremy *
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Jhucel Del Rosario
Date: 5/11/2014 11:35:00 PM
true Love really speaks : ) thank you
Date: 5/11/2014 11:23:00 PM
Jhucel, I enjoyed reading Chubby Love; Nice piece... Verlena
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Jhucel Del Rosario
Date: 5/11/2014 11:34:00 PM
Verlena.. Thank you.. very much. for the appreciation.. True love really speaks

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