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Chrysanthemum Hymns

As the saccharine shadows of daylight dims You can hear the melodies of eager eve Tangerine sunsets composing chrysanthemum hymns Songs that the sun with the zephyr does weave The tempo played by the vibrant sky is before us Marigolds blooming and booming in the heavens bright Psychedelic hues of the sundown plays a chorus Dusk bowing to the music of the dark night Homebound birdies chirruping their way to the nest Wispy clouds bidding their last goodbye for the day Stars entering the scene with supreme sonata fest Maiden moon like a siren mesmerizing with her sway Salmon welkin croons its crescendo as it turns indigo A sprinkling of twinkles spattered across its face Awestruck by the twilight's kaleidoscopic canticle glow! What a sight to behold! Such harmonious charming grace!
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Date: 5/6/2024 11:47:00 AM
Delightful imagery, Jo- a pleasure to read. BIG congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/5/2024 5:52:00 AM
Congrats on your win Jo, wonderful write
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Date: 5/4/2024 11:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a colorful "Chrysanthemum Hymns" write. You painted with words... Have a blessed weekend.............
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Date: 4/30/2024 8:18:00 AM
Your imagery is great Loved your poem that has a hint of spirituality.
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Date: 4/29/2024 11:15:00 PM
Wonderful imagery and engaging charming content! Is this for contest? It would do well.
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Date: 4/29/2024 5:48:00 PM
how captivating your alliterations and imagery are! So many delightful lines that truly read like a hymn. I especially liked: Stars entering the scene with supreme sonata fest.' I love the night sky. An awesome creation, Joanna! Enjoyed the read this evening, Sara
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