Chrome Evening

Emerging white clouds,
Silouetted chrome bodies;
Array of the sun. Inspired by Raul's Nature's Best Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Goff Avatar
June 12, 2009 at 4:13 PM
wow Justin! I just saw such a sundown while walkin' around one of our 'city lakes' (Minneapolis, Mn) just the other night with my daughter! wonderful haiku! and good luck in the contest and thanks for your warm comments! Jim
Cantu Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 3:37 PM
Uuuuuu still images, so superbly described =) the magic time wiii thanks for sharing!!!=)
Neal Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 11:20 PM
Wow, welcome to POETRYSOUP. I hope you enjoy your stay. Chrome eveing is unique, your originality is much loved and appreciated on this forum, have a great day. Love E.
Al-Riyami Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 8:21 AM
You might be my fav poetrysoup haiku poet,yet:) good luck
Neal Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 10:07 PM
Good luck in the contest and welcome to the soup, nice work by the way. DN
Guzzi Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 5:53 PM
good entry!!! light & Love
Lopez Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 3:04 PM
Nice analogy and good luck in Raul's contest.
Fraser Avatar
May 16, 2009 at 10:53 PM
Lovely Haiku Justin, James
Moreno Avatar
May 16, 2009 at 8:21 PM
Thanks for supporting my contest Justin...Raul
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