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Chrome Evening

Emerging white clouds,
Silouetted chrome bodies;
Array of the sun. Inspired by Raul's Nature's Best Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/12/2009 4:13:00 PM
wow Justin! I just saw such a sundown while walkin' around one of our 'city lakes' (Minneapolis, Mn) just the other night with my daughter! wonderful haiku! and good luck in the contest and thanks for your warm comments! Jim
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Date: 5/27/2009 3:37:00 PM
Uuuuuu still images, so superbly described =) the magic time wiii thanks for sharing!!!=)
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Date: 5/18/2009 11:20:00 PM
Wow, welcome to POETRYSOUP. I hope you enjoy your stay. Chrome eveing is unique, your originality is much loved and appreciated on this forum, have a great day. Love E.
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Date: 5/18/2009 8:21:00 AM
You might be my fav poetrysoup haiku poet,yet:) good luck
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Date: 5/17/2009 10:07:00 PM
Good luck in the contest and welcome to the soup, nice work by the way. DN
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Date: 5/17/2009 5:53:00 PM
good entry!!! light & Love
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Date: 5/17/2009 3:04:00 PM
Nice analogy and good luck in Raul's contest.
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Date: 5/16/2009 10:53:00 PM
Lovely Haiku Justin, James
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Date: 5/16/2009 8:21:00 PM
Thanks for supporting my contest Justin...Raul
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