Jim David Poet Free verse

Christ's Mass

He walks among us, observing, waiting, hoping......
The Christmas season is upon us and there's more goodwill between men
Folks hold the door for one another and say "Thank you!"
It's really HIS birthday, but all he has is just one desire
"I wish they would treat each other this way all year through....."

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Andrea Dietrich December 6, 2010 at 9:08 PM The message of Christmas is here in this one. Congratulations, JIM!

Carol Sunshine Brown December 6, 2010 at 11:19 AM Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Christmas" contest Jim. Love, Carol

Leon Wilson December 6, 2010 at 3:43 AM Well done on your 5th place win Jim. God Bless and Merry Christmas. Leon

Sara Kendrick December 5, 2010 at 3:38 PM I am sure that he does want us to love and respect and have that spirit of giving all year..Congratulations on your win..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 5, 2010 at 4:38 AM Congrats Jim on your big win in Francine's contest with this delightful entry luv.. bravo on a top spot win ..enjoy with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire December 4, 2010 at 4:32 PM It really would be nice if the Christmas spirit carried over throughout the year, Jim. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

John Freeman December 4, 2010 at 4:04 PM Congratulations Jim on your unique poem. Agape, Moses

Carrie Richards December 4, 2010 at 3:45 PM A lovely sentiment. Congratulations on your winning poem, Jim! ~ Carrie

Francine Roberts December 4, 2010 at 2:46 PM loved it, important message in it, congrats on your fifth place win in my contest, thank you for supporting it

Carol Sunshine Brown December 2, 2010 at 11:37 AM I wish that I could vivify my comments to you and to all better. But I end up babbling and making no sense. So, I will leave you a message today letting you know I did read your poetry and I enjoyed it. I love reading poetry and the poets here are so talented. Have a wonderful day Jim. Love, Carol