Christ's Mass

He walks among us, observing, waiting, hoping......
The Christmas season is upon us and there's more goodwill between men
Folks hold the door for one another and say "Thank you!"
It's really HIS birthday, but all he has is just one desire
"I wish they would treat each other this way all year through....."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/6/2010 9:08:00 PM
The message of Christmas is here in this one. Congratulations, JIM!
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Date: 12/6/2010 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Christmas" contest Jim. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/6/2010 3:43:00 AM
Well done on your 5th place win Jim. God Bless and Merry Christmas. Leon
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Date: 12/5/2010 3:38:00 PM
I am sure that he does want us to love and respect and have that spirit of giving all year..Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/5/2010 4:38:00 AM
Congrats Jim on your big win in Francine's contest with this delightful entry luv.. bravo on a top spot win ..enjoy with luv..
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Date: 12/4/2010 4:32:00 PM
It really would be nice if the Christmas spirit carried over throughout the year, Jim. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/4/2010 4:04:00 PM
Congratulations Jim on your unique poem. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/4/2010 3:45:00 PM
A lovely sentiment. Congratulations on your winning poem, Jim! ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/4/2010 2:46:00 PM
loved it, important message in it, congrats on your fifth place win in my contest, thank you for supporting it
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Date: 12/2/2010 11:37:00 AM
I wish that I could vivify my comments to you and to all better. But I end up babbling and making no sense. So, I will leave you a message today letting you know I did read your poetry and I enjoyed it. I love reading poetry and the poets here are so talented. Have a wonderful day Jim. Love, Carol
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