Christmas Wishes

Snow is falling, covering everything in town 
                     with a shimmering,light, fluffy, white thick blanket of snow

                   Tall, bare, maple trees are lined up on the side of the road
                                         like sentries standing guard

                                  The lamp posts are lighting the streets 
                                    and the clock tower bells are ringing, 
                                        letting everyone know the time  

                                          A horse with a wool blanket,
                                        harnessed with a wood hames, 
                         and blinders keep him focused on what is up ahead, 
                             pulling a farm wagon, being lead my his owner,
                                carrying supplies, is trotting down the road

                               It’s evening, and big brother is pulling a sleigh 
             with his baby sister and brother all dressed in their warmest clothes, 
                           heavy wool coats, hand knitted hats, gloves,
                                         and scarfs around their necks,            
                               wrapped in a warm blanket in the sleigh  

                                              A stray dog in tow

            He stops in front of a window that is decorated with garland, pine-cones, 
             and gold and red Christmas tree ornaments displaying a variety of toys

                                They all stare in wonderment wishing 
                           Santa would bring them some wonderful toys 
                                         A Lionel train set for me, 
                             A red Raido Flyer wagon for my little brother, 
                              And a doll and doll house for my baby sister.

By Eve Roper 11/25/2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/26/2016 9:26:00 PM
EVE, Congrats on your Best love poem #3 win. Hugs -- LINDA --
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Date: 1/14/2016 4:45:00 AM
Congrats on yet another awesome win with this wonderful write Eve.
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Date: 1/13/2016 7:06:00 PM
eve, your poem really captured the beauty and the nostalgia and magic of Xmas . So much great description in this. Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Date: 1/13/2016 12:34:00 PM
Beautiful imagery of an old-time Christmas scene...reminds me of a Norman Rockwell painting! Congrats on your nice win, Eve. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/13/2016 11:55:00 AM
Eve, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love ** SKAT
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Date: 12/1/2014 9:42:00 PM
There was just something really cozy about this piece. From the sleigh being pulled by a child, to the kids giving their Christmas lists in the end. Well written free verse, Eve. You were generous in the details.
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Date: 12/3/2014 3:53:00 PM
Thank you, Timothy. I am glad you enjoyed it.Christmas is almost here, have got to get ready. Blessing sir and hugs eve
Date: 11/28/2014 10:06:00 PM
Lovely visions of Christmas. Let's all remember it is Christmas and not happy holidays. Loved it and look forward to more. Hugs and blessings Edith
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Date: 11/29/2014 3:33:00 PM
Thank you, Edith. you need to read "Vision of a Child" I really think you would like that one. It's about Jesus. Hugs and blessings eve
Date: 11/25/2014 3:09:00 PM
love this enchanting write
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/25/2014 3:49:00 PM
Dear Jack, thank you for your wonderful compliment, I am glad you like it. Have a wonderful and blessed Thanksgiving too. :) blessings eve
Date: 11/25/2014 2:59:00 PM
Hope all their wishes come true...beautiful Eve..hugs Tim
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Date: 11/25/2014 3:43:00 PM
Oooppsss.Sorry ,Tim, I don't know what is going on with my computer but I see this is happening too Often...Grrr.. Thank you, very much and have a Happy Thanksgiving :) eve
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Date: 11/25/2014 3:40:00 PM
Jan, thank you so very much. Blessings and a Happy Thanksgiving to you :) eve
Date: 11/25/2014 2:30:00 PM
Very beautifully written Eve. A wonderful winter wonderland.
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Date: 11/25/2014 3:46:00 PM
Thank you, Brenda, since the seasons is here I cannot resist.Have Blessed and Happy Thanksgiving:) hugs eve
Date: 11/25/2014 12:18:00 PM
Sweet and nice -- just the way I like it. Hope you all have a safe and blessed Thanksgiving.
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Date: 11/25/2014 3:47:00 PM
David, I am glad you like it. Have a wonderful and blessed Thanksgiving too. :) blessings eve
Date: 11/25/2014 12:01:00 PM
What a charming write Eve:-) Hugs Jan xxx its a 7 from me!
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Date: 11/25/2014 3:41:00 PM
Jan, thank you so very much. Blessings and a Happy Thanksgiving to you :) eve
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