Tim Smith Poet Rhyme

Christmas Wish

When i wake from my happy dream 
I remember magic did appear 
Angels sang and freedom rang 
and you and I were there 

We sat amongst the flowing fields 
with fauna all around 
I held you tight through the night 
never making but a sound 

Before we woke three words we spoke 
which were meaningless until today 
as we kissed under the acient oak 
I asked you if you'd stay 

For I have dreamt and I have wished
for a love that will ring true 
so a Christmas Wish I ask of you 
is for you to love me too.

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Poet Destroyer A January 26, 2016 at 9:23 PM TIM, Congrats on your Best love poem #3 win. Hugs -- LINDA --

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 14, 2016 at 4:39 AM Congrats on awesome win with this wonderful write Tim.

D.W. Rodgers January 13, 2016 at 9:58 PM A Christmas wish always comes true, at least in the movies. Congrats on your win.

Susan Gentry January 13, 2016 at 7:08 PM Congratulations! Love it!

Skat A January 13, 2016 at 11:45 AM Tim, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love **Skat**

Carol Eastman December 26, 2015 at 10:21 AM Sigh!... You've still get that sigh factor... What can I say except... may you continue to write like this throughout the next year... Some how I doubt that you will stop writting like this. Hope you had a great Christmas and follow that with a Great New Year! Your forever sighing fans... Carol, Hubby, Grandpa Troll, and Dragon... PS... Grandpa Troll wants to know if he can use your romantic poems on his girlfriend Trolls... He says they really work for him with the girls... Carol Eastman December 26, 2015 at 10:22 AM Whaat? Did I miss this as poem of the week... Where was I? Congrats!

Sandra Haight December 26, 2015 at 8:47 AM A belated congrats on Poem of the Day, Tim! A very lovely Christmas wish! Sandra

Arthur Vaso December 24, 2015 at 12:05 PM Beautiful Christmas poem, congrats on POTD! Merry Christmas!!!!

Paul Callus December 24, 2015 at 8:55 AM Truly lovely, sweet and romantic, Tim!! Hope all your dreams will come true. ~ May you have a lovely, merry and blessed Christmas. ~ All the best. // paul Paul Callus December 24, 2015 at 8:57 AM Just realized that this is a POTD!! Congratulations.

Vera Duggan December 23, 2015 at 6:34 PM Hi Tim,, first of all Merry Christmas to you and your family, now this beautiful little poem is absolutely lovely and so romantic, we have a park down the road where we can sit romantically with all the flora and fauna around us, you would love it........Take care...........Vera

Demetrios Trifiatis December 23, 2015 at 10:35 AM With such a romantic poem certainly your wish will come true, dear Tim! Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! Tim Smith December 23, 2015 at 2:23 PM Merry Christmas my great friend !!!

Ann Reilly December 22, 2015 at 5:32 PM Before we woke three words we spoke... What were they?? I thought... 'I love you'? They were meaningless until we woke and kissed and made it real? Then I checked.. will my Christmas wish come true, do you love me too? I love this poem:) Tim Smith December 23, 2015 at 2:22 PM Thank You Ann

Eileen Manassian December 22, 2015 at 4:19 PM AWWWWWW....sweet, Tim. Very sweet. Congrats on POTD. :) You should listen to...All I want for Christmas is YOU! :) Hugs Tim Smith December 23, 2015 at 2:21 PM Thanks Eileen

Judy Konos December 22, 2015 at 3:29 PM I didn't know what fauna was so I looked it up mega animals all around you....so the three words I would have shouted were HELP ME TIM.......Meanwhile Congratulations on Poem of the Day...it's more than lovely.....It's a Tim Smithy sort of thingy......... Tim Smith December 23, 2015 at 2:21 PM Thank you Judy Judy Judy!!!

Maurice Yvonne December 22, 2015 at 1:40 PM Simply gorgeous, such romantic words for a very lucky lady indeed. Tim Smith December 23, 2015 at 2:20 PM Thank You my dear friend

Merle Manu December 22, 2015 at 1:32 PM Hooray, Tim! Pretty poem ~ Tim Smith December 23, 2015 at 2:20 PM Thank You Merle

Casarah Nance December 22, 2015 at 1:16 PM aww, a nice poem of the day Tim, many grats Tim Smith December 23, 2015 at 2:19 PM Thanks Cas

Anne-Lise Andresen December 22, 2015 at 12:40 PM - Lovely poem, Tim - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. !! - Merry Christmas ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Tim Smith December 23, 2015 at 2:19 PM Thanks A-L. Merry Christmas!!

Eve Roper December 22, 2015 at 10:25 AM Congratulations on Poem of the day, Tim. Merry Christmas to you and all your love one Tim Smith December 23, 2015 at 2:18 PM Thank You Eve...Merry Christmas!!

Michael Tor December 22, 2015 at 10:14 AM Great gifts are worth waiting for. Patience brings knowledge. She will come to you when you least expect it. She will be fortunate to find you for the love in your heart is often shown in your passionate and loving writes. Congratulations Tim for a heartfelt write on POTD congratulations my friend and if you haven't found her yet you will. Tim Smith December 23, 2015 at 2:18 PM Thank you Michael

Ralph Sergi December 22, 2015 at 6:42 AM Sweet poem of love on Christmas, Tim. Congrats on the POTD.

Charmaine Chircop December 21, 2015 at 6:09 PM I love this poem..indeed beautiful..A fave . Tim Smith December 23, 2015 at 2:17 PM Thank You Charma...have a Happy Christmas : )

Jan Allison December 21, 2015 at 4:22 PM very romantic Tim:-) hugs jan xx Tim Smith December 23, 2015 at 2:16 PM Thanks Jan

Skat A December 21, 2015 at 4:17 PM so sweet... LOVE SKAT Tim Smith December 23, 2015 at 2:16 PM Thanks Skat