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Christmas Wish

When i wake from my happy dream 
I remember magic did appear 
Angels sang and freedom rang 
and you and I were there 

We sat amongst the flowing fields 
with fauna all around 
I held you tight through the night 
never making but a sound 

Before we woke three words we spoke 
which were meaningless until today 
as we kissed under the acient oak 
I asked you if you'd stay 

For I have dreamt and I have wished
for a love that will ring true 
so a Christmas Wish I ask of you 
is for you to love me too. 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/26/2016 9:23:00 PM
TIM, Congrats on your Best love poem #3 win. Hugs -- LINDA --
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Date: 1/14/2016 4:39:00 AM
Congrats on awesome win with this wonderful write Tim.
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Date: 1/13/2016 9:58:00 PM
A Christmas wish always comes true, at least in the movies. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/13/2016 7:08:00 PM
Congratulations! Love it!
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Date: 1/13/2016 11:45:00 AM
Tim, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love **Skat**
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Date: 12/26/2015 10:21:00 AM
Sigh!... You've still get that sigh factor... What can I say except... may you continue to write like this throughout the next year... Some how I doubt that you will stop writting like this. Hope you had a great Christmas and follow that with a Great New Year! Your forever sighing fans... Carol, Hubby, Grandpa Troll, and Dragon... PS... Grandpa Troll wants to know if he can use your romantic poems on his girlfriend Trolls... He says they really work for him with the girls...
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Carol Eastman
Date: 12/26/2015 10:22:00 AM
Whaat? Did I miss this as poem of the week... Where was I? Congrats!
Date: 12/26/2015 8:47:00 AM
A belated congrats on Poem of the Day, Tim! A very lovely Christmas wish! Sandra
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Date: 12/24/2015 12:05:00 PM
Beautiful Christmas poem, congrats on POTD! Merry Christmas!!!!
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Date: 12/24/2015 8:55:00 AM
Truly lovely, sweet and romantic, Tim!! Hope all your dreams will come true. ~ May you have a lovely, merry and blessed Christmas. ~ All the best. // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/24/2015 8:57:00 AM
Just realized that this is a POTD!! Congratulations.
Date: 12/23/2015 6:34:00 PM
Hi Tim,, first of all Merry Christmas to you and your family, now this beautiful little poem is absolutely lovely and so romantic, we have a park down the road where we can sit romantically with all the flora and fauna around us, you would love it........Take care...........Vera
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Date: 12/23/2015 10:35:00 AM
With such a romantic poem certainly your wish will come true, dear Tim! Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/23/2015 2:23:00 PM
Merry Christmas my great friend !!!
Date: 12/22/2015 5:32:00 PM
Before we woke three words we spoke... What were they?? I thought... 'I love you'? They were meaningless until we woke and kissed and made it real? Then I checked.. will my Christmas wish come true, do you love me too? I love this poem:)
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/23/2015 2:22:00 PM
Thank You Ann
Date: 12/22/2015 4:19:00 PM
AWWWWWW....sweet, Tim. Very sweet. Congrats on POTD. :) You should listen to...All I want for Christmas is YOU! :) Hugs
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/23/2015 2:21:00 PM
Thanks Eileen
Date: 12/22/2015 3:29:00 PM
I didn't know what fauna was so I looked it up mega animals all around you....so the three words I would have shouted were HELP ME TIM.......Meanwhile Congratulations on Poem of the Day...it's more than lovely.....It's a Tim Smithy sort of thingy.........
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/23/2015 2:21:00 PM
Thank you Judy Judy Judy!!!
Date: 12/22/2015 1:40:00 PM
Simply gorgeous, such romantic words for a very lucky lady indeed.
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/23/2015 2:20:00 PM
Thank You my dear friend
Date: 12/22/2015 1:32:00 PM
Hooray, Tim! Pretty poem ~
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/23/2015 2:20:00 PM
Thank You Merle
Date: 12/22/2015 1:16:00 PM
aww, a nice poem of the day Tim, many grats
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/23/2015 2:19:00 PM
Thanks Cas
Date: 12/22/2015 12:40:00 PM
- Lovely poem, Tim - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. !! - Merry Christmas ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/23/2015 2:19:00 PM
Thanks A-L. Merry Christmas!!
Date: 12/22/2015 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations on Poem of the day, Tim. Merry Christmas to you and all your love one
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/23/2015 2:18:00 PM
Thank You Eve...Merry Christmas!!
Date: 12/22/2015 10:14:00 AM
Great gifts are worth waiting for. Patience brings knowledge. She will come to you when you least expect it. She will be fortunate to find you for the love in your heart is often shown in your passionate and loving writes. Congratulations Tim for a heartfelt write on POTD congratulations my friend and if you haven't found her yet you will.
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/23/2015 2:18:00 PM
Thank you Michael
Date: 12/22/2015 6:42:00 AM
Sweet poem of love on Christmas, Tim. Congrats on the POTD.
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Date: 12/21/2015 6:09:00 PM
I love this poem..indeed beautiful..A fave .
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/23/2015 2:17:00 PM
Thank You Charma...have a Happy Christmas : )
Date: 12/21/2015 4:22:00 PM
very romantic Tim:-) hugs jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/23/2015 2:16:00 PM
Thanks Jan
Date: 12/21/2015 4:17:00 PM
so sweet... LOVE SKAT
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/23/2015 2:16:00 PM
Thanks Skat